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THE FIVE: PROLOUGE

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It
begins today. The Five will be awakened, and called by life. Fate
shall work it's way, and the one ruler shall be destroyed.
However...”





PROLOUGE





A
lone rider rode through a field of burnt grass, smoke weighing on his
shoulders. A drum was rolling in the distance. Death walked in the
field, men and women longing for one last breath of air, before there
final heart beat. The rider rode past them, not forgetting his errand
before him. He did not look back as the field became smaller and
smaller; then it vanished. He did not want to meet the fiery beast
that killed them all.





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          *             *





  1. He
    went rode for a long distance with only the sound of the horse
    galloping on the rode, letting him know he was alive. He was near
    the western gates of Terra, when he heard the flapping of wings. It
    sounded like bats flying in the mist, but louder and it echoed
    through the dreadful skies, and the smallest caves. A shadow then
    passed over the sun and the rider knew that soon the beast would be
    upon him. It's terrible wrath would consume him, it was stronger
    than a dragon, and faster than any horse. It dashed across the sky,
    with frightful grace. The rider came to the gates and yelled with
    command, “OPEN THE GATES! LET ME IN”. The gate swung
    open and the rider rode fast to the hall of Greenwealth.



There
was a roar and the sky became dark and the it was sweltering in the
city of Terra. The rider dismounted at the steps of Greenwealth. He
sprinted up the steps and burst through the golden doors, the hall
was large and upheld by many gold and silver pillars and at the far
end a man sat on a high throne. The man on the throne was worried,
giving orders to soldiers and writing messages to send.





Tarrant!”,
the  king said, seeming less worried and nervous than he was, “It
is a good fortune you have came.”





I
bring messages from the kingdom of Entity”, Tarrant said, “The
first message is... a gathering in the fields of Comrallen, as
preparation for war. The second is...” CRACK!





There
was shouting and screaming from outside and the king and Tarrant ran
outside to see that the beast had demolished the northern gate. The
atrocious monster, was attacking the citizens who were fleeing from
his grasp.





The
second is to awaken the Five”




















                      

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GreatBigCranberries's avatar
Oh, very suspenseful. I'm wondering what the Five are, and what this beast is. I would have thought a dragon since it seems to have burned things, but you said it's faster than a dragon, so I guess it's not.

It's a good prologue, it gets you interested.